托福作文写作范文详解agree.docx

托福作文写作范文详解Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Mostexperiencesinourlivesthatseemeddifficultatthetimebecomevaluablelessonsforthefuture.Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportouranswer.1 .题目翻译：生活中一度的痛苦终将成为将来的财富。同意与否？2 .审题关键词：Mostexperience;Seemeddifficult;Atatime;Valuablelessons;Future;Reasonsandexamples3 .论证分析：正：Steppingoutofthe"comfortzone"isdifficultbutcanenhanceonetoalevelbeyondexpectation.正:Startingoutagainisalwaysdifficultbuttheexperienceoffailureservesasaninstructionforfuturecareerorrelationship.正：Sometimesdifficultthingsarenecessaryeffortweneedtomakeforpromotionandsuccess.范文Somepeoplearguethatmostexperiencesinourlivesthatseemeddifficultatthetimecanlaterbecomevaluableexperiences.Icannotagreewiththemmore.TherearenumerousreasonswhyIholdconfidenceonthisopinion,andIwouldexploreonlyafewprimaryoneshere.此段结构首段，第一句话提出背景，第二句话讲出了作者的观点，第三句话承上启下，说明有几个理由要和大家分享。此段功能首段为文章提供了背景，陈述了作者论点，并进行简单的过渡。Difficultiesarebeneficialtoourpersonalgrowth.InthecourseofourIifezwearegoingtofacenumerousdifficultiesandobstacles,andeachdifficultywillhelpusgrowupzandbecomeavaluablelessonforthefuture.Atoddlerfellsoffthegroundformanytimesbeforeheknowshowtowalkzandachildlearnshowtoswimafterhedrinkswaterintheswimmingpool.Inaddition,onlyafterweexperiencedfailures,weknowthevalueofsuccess.Wewillneverappreciateanythingthatcomessoeasy.Difficultiescanmakeusfeelstrongerandbemoreconfidentforthefutureobstacles.此段结构本段是一个总分总的结构。开头提出论点，即困难对我们的个人成长来说是很有益的。后面对论点进行了进一步扩展。本段可以分为两个层次,第一个层次告诉我们经历困难能够积累宝贵的经验，并列举孩童学步和学游泳的例子来进行扩充。第二个部分说如果没有经历过失败,我们可能不会那么珍惜成功的喜悦。最后总结照应开头的分论点，总结困难和失败给我们带来何种有益的东西。此段功能本段是文章第二段，提出了正文的第一个分论点。Furthermore,difficultiesinourworkcanhelpusgainmoreexperienceandknowledge.Mostofthetimeswecangainknowledgeandexperiencesfasterthroughexperiencingdifficultiesinourlifeandtryingtofindasolutionstotheperplexitiesthatweface.Thereisafamoussayingznopain,nogain.Forexample,whenwetakeonanewjobthatwedonothavemuchexperiencein,thefirstfewweekscanbeextremelypainfulandwemayfeelenormouspressureanddifficulties.Andwewilltryourbesttoadjust,tolearnandtothink,howtodothisjobbetter.Themoredifficultieswefeelztheharderwetrytoacquiretheskillsandknowledgetoovercomeit.Learningandthisstageisextremelyefficientandourproblem-solvingskillswellincrease.Afterweovercomemoreandmoreproblems,wecanbecomeanexperiencedworkerinthisfieldandwillbeabletotakeonmorechallenges.Wewillneverfearthatwewillfacethesamekindofproblemagain.Thismeansthatwehaveaccumulatedvaluableexperiencesforthefuture.此段结构总分的结构，开头提出论点，即工作上的困难可以让我们学会更多。后面对论点进行了进一步解释，即我们能如何从困难中积累经验和知识,提高能力，从而做得更好。此段功能本段是文章第三段，提出了正文的第二个支持论点。Inaword,adifficultexperienceisagiftthatlifegivesus.Weshouldappreciateitandtakeitasapreciousopportunitytogainknowledgeandexperienceaboutourstudy,workandlife.此段结构直接进入总结：逆境是上天给我们的礼物。接着速一步延伸：我们应该珍惜和抓住这些机会来锻炼自己，承受成长的考验。此段功能本段是文章的尾段，照应开头，总结全文，并重新陈述了作者立场。满分要素剖析：语言表达本文语言优美流畅，有很多的动词短语和连接词组可以借鉴，比如furthermore,inaddition,inaword等段落之间，句子之间的过渡连接词，让文章更有条理。用词多样，在句式上常用状语从句前置，在句式的多样性上也起到了很好的调节。1. Icannotagreewiththemmore.本句是一个非常地道的表达，cannotagreemore用来表明作者的立场，对于某一方非常支持。除了这个搭配之外，文中还有另外一些优秀的动词词组和短语，比如：bebeneficialto,takeonanewjobchallengezfalloff等等z这在本文中是一大灵点。2. TherearenumerousreasonswhyIholdconfidenceonthisopinion,andIwouldexploreonlyafewprimaryoneshere.本句中含有thereasonwhy从句，引出对于作者观点的讨论，另外，holdconfidenceon用来表达对某个观点的支持，避免了和agree等用词的重复；explore用来代替discuss等一些使用频率较高的词汇，让人眼前一新。3. Themoredifficultieswefeelztheharderwetrytoacquiretheskillsandknowledgetoovercomeit.这是the+比较级zthe+kb5级句式的运用，表示越越的意义，前一句作为条件状语从句主谓用正常语序，而后面的主句则正常和倒装语序皆可，本句里采用的是正常语序。4. Afterweovercomemoreandmoreproblems,wecanbecomeanexperiencedworkerinthisfieldandwillbeabletotakeonmorechallenges.这是一个状语从句前置的句式，moreandmore表达的意义不第三句中的两个the+比较级连用的意义相似，这里表示越来越多的意思，而can和beableto的分别使用避免了词汇单一的情况。逻辑结构本文完全从正面来进行观点论证，用两个分论点来对自己的立场说明支撑，非常清晰明了。