令人眼前一亮的读后续写12大高分句式（精品）.docx

令人眼前一亮的读后续写12大高分句式（精品）读后续写句式1：无灵主语（用无生命的事物来做主语）（1）心理、情绪：awaveof+情绪名词+固定动词+sb”AwaveofsorrowwashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.AstrongsenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews.描述心情的名词happiness/joy/delight开心anger/rage/fury狂怒sadness/sorrow/grief悲伤gratitudeareciation感激admiration钦佩/赞赏guilt/remorse愧疚悔恨fearterrorfrightanic害怕/恐慌astonishmentshocksurriSe震惊动词seizecatch（caught过去式）strike（struck过去式）surroundtakeholdofwashovercomeover+sb.有行为意义的名词：“一见到/一想到”Thesight/thoughtofsthmadesb+情绪形容词：一见/想到sth,某人.一Atthesight/thoughtofsth,sbdidsth:一见/想到sth,某人例：1.一想到和爷爷度过的时光，我就感到十分快乐。Thethoughtofthemomentssharedwithgrandpafilledmewithgreatjoy.2.一见到那头熊，他就紧张。Whenhesawthebear,hefeltverynervous.（改写）（3）无生命事物作主语，结尾句：1 .Thewordsstilllingeredinone,smind.那此话还蒙绕在心头。2 .Thestorytaughtusthatnevershouldwejudgeabookbyitscover.3 .Theexperienceenlightenedhimthat.这段经历让他明白.4 .Anideasuddenlystrucksb.that+句子.（某人突然想到）5.ItgraduallydawnedUPOnmethat.(我逐渐意识到)读后续写句式2：比喻(多用于情绪/动作描写，强调)情绪句式一：“likeaxxx”aFilledWith+情绪，sbdosthlikeaxxxwFiIIedWithrage,heChargedtowardsmeIikeafurybull/Iior.他满腔怒火，如愤怒的公牛/狮子向我冲来。Faningintosadness,Roseburiedherfaceinarmslikeadeflatedballoon.像泄了气的气球。DroWllinlaughter,Jimmydashedoutoftheschoolgatelikeafreebird.HappinesswashedoverhimIikeWaITnsunshine.幸福像暖阳洒在他身上。AngertookholdOfhimIikeaWikibeast.愦怒像野兽一样抓住了他。情绪句式二：“as+情绪形容词+as+意象”开心(be)ashappyas(be)ashappyas（be）ashappyas（地道俚语;clam蚌）例：Onthelastdayofschool,Jimmydashedoutoftheschoolgatefeelingasfreeasabird.紧张;不安樵虑（anxious/upset）asnervousasanantCOnahotPan）热锅上的蚂蚁=asnervousasaCatOnhotbricks（地道俚语）害怕Atthesightofthesnake,sheturnedaspaleas喜（形容词可替代：pleased;delighted;cheerful;overjoyed;joyful;blissful）ashappyasakingashappyasapiginmudashappyasaclamathightide怒（形容词可替代:mad;furious）asangryasabullangryasaragingstorm哀assadasahomelessdog累（形容词可替代：exhausted）astiredasthewingsofabirdastiredasaworn-outshoeastiredasanox紧张不安asnervousasanantonahotpanasnervousasacatonhotbrick害怕sb,sfaceturnedaspaleasasheetasstrongasanox健壮如牛/强/厉害astoughasoldboots坚强asslyasafox像狐狸一样狡猾assilentasastone沉默asbusyasabee忙得团团转ashungryasahunter饿asheavyasanelephant像头大象一样重aseasyasapieceofcake轻而易举assickasadog身体不舒服,病得严重asbitterasasourlime苦闷asproudasapeacock像孔雀一样骄傲ascoldasice冰冷asfunnyasamonkey像猴子一样有趣asbigasabus体积大assillyasasheep傻asbrightasdaylight心情/脸亮起来asbraveasalion像狮子一样勇敢asradiantasroses容光焕发asplayfulasakitten顽皮调皮asshiningasdiamonds像钻石般闪耀He,sasgoodasgold善良友好asgentleasabreeze像微风一样温柔情绪句式三："aseaofsorroww（anoceanof/awhirlwindof）（暗喻）Shefeltawhirlwindofhappinesspassingthroughher.股幸福的旋风掠过她Shedrownherselfinaseaofsorrow.她将自己淹没在悲伤的海洋中读后续写句式3：倒装句（全部倒装）1.句首：地点状语（副词/介词短语）全部倒装Onthetray（托盘）WereapieceofsandwichandoatPorridge（燕麦粥）Insidetheboxlayastunningnecklace.Atthefootofthehillsstoodaschool.Inhishandswasabunchofflowers.（一束花）2.倒装句（部分倒装）后接一般疑问句语序句首：否定词（SeldOm;Rarely；NeVer）Seldomhasheseensuchafiercecreaturebefore.(陈述语序Hehasseldomseen.)NeVerhadShebeenmorehelpless.(原本陈述语序：Shehadneverbeen.)(2)句首：1.ittIe（几乎不；常与，感受”类的词搭配，如UiIderStand,know,realize)1.ittlehadIrealizedtheurgencyofthetask.我还没意识到这项任务的紧迫性1.ittleWaSSheawarethathewasgone.我没意识到/我不清楚1.ittIedidSheUnderStandwhatthemanwastalkingabout.她不知他在说啥句首：Onn。account/UndernoCirCilmStanCeS(绝不)OnnoaccountShoUldyoujudgeapersonbytheappearance.UndernocircumstancesShC)UldWeStartaprojectwithoutanypreparation.(4)句首：OIlIy+状语(onlythen;onlywhen;onlyatthatmoment)OnlywhenthingsturnurgentwillItakeactiontogetthemsettled.只有当事情变得紧急时，我才会采取行动解决问题。OnlyinthiswayCoUIdIaddresstheissuewithouthurtingmum,sfeeling.Onlybyhardworkcanyouachieveyouraim.只有通过努力工作，你才能到达到目标。（achieveone，Saim达到目标）（5）句首：Nosooner.than./Hardly.when.（一就）原句：Ihadfinishedtheicecreamwhenmomcamebackwithabowlofbroccoli.NosoonerhadIfinishedtheicecreamthanmomcamebackwithabowlofbroccoli.（6）句首：So.that;Such.that“So+形容词that”（强加因果关系）64Such+be动词+名词（that）”（主语位置：suchwas和that放在原句主语前后）SoscaredWaSMaCthathestoodstill,notknowingwhattodototally.SoSWiftWaStheflowingWaterthathefailedtogetclosetothetrappedcar.Suchwastheawkwardexperiencethatremindedmeofthevalueofhonesty.(7)IIotOlly+倒装，butalso+正常语序NotonlyWaSJaneexhaustedandhungry,butshewasalsoextremelyregretfulforwhatshehaddone.(8)让步状语从句的倒装：“adj.+as/though+主谓”RelUCtantasIwas,Ihadnochoicebuttowashthedishesastold.(ThoughIwasreluctant,Ihadto.不愿)EXhaUStndaedhungryashewas,hecarriedonclimbingthemountain.Uglythoughthemanwas,heboreakindheartaspureasadiamond.读后续写：倒装句(练习)1.1haven,teverfeltsolonely.-never2.1couldn'tworkbecauseoftheloudnoise.-so.that3.Shedidn'tplayalotofbasketball.-little4.Peterdidn'tunderstandthesituation.Ifhehad,hewouldhavequit.-had5.Thestoryhasn'tbeentoldcorrectly.-rarely6.Sheboughtthecarafterhehadexplaineditsbenefits.-onlyafter7.1don,teatporkveryoften.-seldom8.1wou