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1、【2021级成都二诊书面表达】你校英文报正举行以ThePowerofSmile,i为题的征文比赛，请结合自身经历写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.自身经历；2.你的感悟。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。ThePowerofSmile审题体裁：短文（夹叙夹议文）一微笑的力量时态：一般过去时/一般现在时人称：第一人称/第三人称谋篇布局结构：1.事例T观点；2.观点T事例；3.观点T事例T观点写作难点：1 .smile一词是指微笑这个表情动作还是引申含义？（eg.面对困难、挫折等不轻易放弃，乐观勇敢面对?）2 .power是一种什么力量？（不能泛泛而谈，要具体化）3 .写亲身经历时叙述部分

2、容易写得平淡乏味怎么突破？（添加关于心理活动、表情动作等描述）4 .写感悟时要合情合理、恰如其分，不要言过其实（微笑不是万能的I重难点突破1.写亲身经历时可以选哪些场景？如何切入？A.社交场合一结识新朋友、参加社交活动等（微笑代表友好、开放，能缓解尴尬、紧张情绪等，给对方留下好的印象）；B.人际关系一与家人或朋友产生矛盾冲突、心情低落时（微笑代表宽容、理解等，起到减少矛盾冲突，缓解人际冲突新乍用）C.身处逆境、遭遇挫折时比赛或考试失利等；（微笑代表了安慰、鼓励，告诉我们要坚强勇敢面对困难、挫折，对未来充满希望等）D.成长或成功时通过努力成绩取得进步或认真准备比赛取得成功（微笑代表了认可、喜悦、

3、自豪、充满信心等）E.自己失意却帮助他人被感谢时等（微笑代表了喜悦、感激之情，能帮助我们改善心情、振作精神）ApossibleversionTherearetimeswhenasmallactioncanmakeabigdifference.Smileisjustoneofthemandmyrecentexperiencehasdeepenedmyunderstandingofitsmagicalpower.ThePowerofSmileTherearetimeswhenagestureassimpleasasmilecandowonders,lightingupsomeoneinthedar

4、knessandevenhealingthesoul.Overwhelmedbythestressfrommypooracademicperformance,Iwasonthevergeofbreakingdown.Noticingmyfrustration,Shelly,mybestfriendcametoofferafewwordsofcomfortbutIwasinsuchlowspiritsthatIblurtedoutsomesharpwordsandsheranawayweeping.Regrettably,IwastooashamedtoapologizeandIcouldn,t

5、feelworse,whichthrewmeintoaworldofdarkness.ThemomentIsawherapproachingthenextday,Iloweredmyheadimmediately,tryingtoshunher/avoidherdeliberately.However;shestoppedmeandgavemeahug.WhenIlookedup,Imetasmilingface,assweetasflowersinthespring/asgentleasasummerbreeze.Atthatmoment,allmyanxietyanddepressionm

6、eltedaway.Whenwordsfail,smilespeaks.Usefulexpressions1. boostone,smood/cheersb.up2. establish/forgeacloserelationship/rapport/tieswithsb.与某人建立亲密的关系(connectwithsb./bondwithsb.(2)buildcreateforgeaspecialbondwithsb.)3. strengthenthebondbetween.and.4. reducefeelingsofanxietyanddepression减少焦虑和抑郁5. make/l

7、eaveagoodfirstimpressiononsb.6. overcome/getoverembarrassment/awkwardness消除lU、局促不安7. relieve/easetensionandstress缓解紧张和压力8. take/drawcomfortfromone,swords从某人的话中得到安慰9. offerafewwordsofcomfort说上几句安慰的话语10. comeintoconflictwithsb.(resolveconflictswithsb.)情绪情感描写11. Iwasontheverge/brinkofbreakingdown.12. T

8、earsstreamed/rolleddownmycheeks./Tearswelledupinmyeyes.13. Iwassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.14. WiththeCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,IamverynervousandinlowspiritsbecauseIamafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.15. Overcomewithbitterdisappointment,Icouldnthelpweepingwi

9、thmyfaceburiedinmyhands.16. InformedofthebadnewszIwasseizedbyaburstofsadnessandsankontothechair,myeyeswet.17. TheinstantIsetmyeyesontheresult,Ifeltalumpinmythroat如哽在喉/mythroattightened,sorrowfultearsblurringmyvision.18. Aterriblepangofgriefenvelopingme,Iburstintobittertears,feelingasif.19. Ifeltlike

10、allmyenergyhadbeendrained,feelingemptyanddespaired.20. Gloomanddepressionclouded/envelopedme,likeablackhole,swallowingmeupfromtheinside.21. Withsomanyeyesfixedonme,embarrassmenttakeholdofmesofirmlythatmypalmsweresweatingandmylegstrembling/mykneesgotweak22. Standingontheplatform/stage,Ibecameincreasi

11、nglyembarrassedandcouldfeelmyheartbeating/poundingwildly,myfaceburning.安慰、鼓励23. Pullyourselftogether.振作起来。24. Dontletitgetyoudown.Itwillbeoverwithsoon.别为此烦恼。事情很快就会过去的。25. Dontbesomiserable!别这愁眉苦脸的。26. CheerUP!Thingswillworkoutforthebest高兴点儿。事情会有好结果的。27. Takeheart-wellfindawayout.振作起来，我们会有办法的。28. Ifsnotasbadasallthat.事情没有那么糟。